Immersed in the historical background of the tenth century, this true tale of Good King Wenceslaus, as told by his faithful servant Poidevin, brings the reader into the Dark Ages. Fear grips the land of Bohemia as the faithful face betrayal and persecution under the reign of the pagan Duchess Dragomira. As she struggles for power with the rightful heir, Prince Vaclav, her foes forge alliances in secret despite the risk of discovery. Who will survive?
“Treachery and Truth” is a Christian novella that explores the land of Bohemia and the fall of a beloved leader. Told through the eyes of Poidevin, the narrative can be sometimes cumbersome but has an innocence that I find myself divided over.
On one hand I understand why the story is simply told. Poidevin wouldn’t of been very educated and therefore wouldn’t understand the complexity of the plots swirling around him. On the other hand, his bleak beginnings and abusive new mistress would have required him to have some wit just to survive. Servants lived at the whim of their masters and would of needed to anticipate what their masters were needing or feeling. This leads me to feel like (while young in age) Poidevin would of been adept to tell this story in a bit more complex way.
While I agree that a lot of Pagan practices (like human sacrifice) are atrocious, I felt that by mainly focusing on this aspect of that religion the author was glossing over the intolerance Price Vaclav shows to the Pagans while at the same time condemning his mother for her intolerance for Christians. I found this narrative to be one sided and did real damage to an otherwise very interesting story.
The imagery in this story is well done and Jones did a fantastic amount of research to make this world come alive. I found it pretty accurate and am definitely impressed.
In conclusion, I felt the story was well written and researched but felt Jones damaged the likeability factor of Vaclav with his one sided tolerance. In such a short book the damage done by this could of been balanced with more information or further examination of Vaclav’s character. After reading I don’t feel the kinship I like to feel with a character. My suggestion would be to extend the story by adding more character building scenes and by shaping Poidevin as less ignorant and feeble.
The Technical Data:
Title: Treachery and Truth | Series: N/A | Author(s): Katy Huth Jones |Publisher: Pauline Books & Media / Publication Date: 1-1-2016 |Pages: 528 (Print) | ISBN: 978-0819875358 |Genre(s): Medieval Historical Fiction |Language: English |Rating: 3 out of 5 | Date Read: 11-25-2016 |Source: Copy from author.